Ha, that's awesome. I love how you used this web tool to show both what's happening in the story as well as your thoughts about what the character is thinking. I especially like how you have his conscious encouraging him to do it....that's funny because in the end, it's his conscious that causes him to confess!
Cool story Emeli i liked how you did the story in the form of a pop up book.
ReplyDeleteHa, that's awesome. I love how you used this web tool to show both what's happening in the story as well as your thoughts about what the character is thinking. I especially like how you have his conscious encouraging him to do it....that's funny because in the end, it's his conscious that causes him to confess!
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ReplyDeletegreat book emeli i had a good time reading it
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